| 2016-01-22 01:57:26 |
Family Time. Part 1
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I had proper spacing, spelling, and paragraphs when i typed it out in Microsoft word-pad (which is recommended to do instead of typing it in here). But, When I pasted it to the site the spacing went all off. This is also my first story so I hope to gain skill as I go by reading through your comments to see what I can improve on, BUT, as I see here, you people do not care to help anyone but yourselves. If I wanted to be told how terrible it was I would have posted this as my story "they had sex, THE END". I did put quite a bit of thought into what I was typing and how it was worded. So, I am sorry that my story is not up to your jerking off standards. "Peace" |