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Date Story title Comment
2016-08-11 20:39:58 Ananda's Serum_(2) Thank you! The second chapter is in the works, and it definitely has most of the material you suggested already! Thank you for your service. I'm an active duty Navy NCO so good to hear from a brother.
2016-08-11 15:06:08 Ananda's Serum_(2) Thank you! The error has been edited and is now consistent with the rest of the text! If you do not like this story I encourage you to let me know your thoughts unfiltered. If you like it please rate it positive. Also let me known if you want the sequel which will contain the answers to the first comment.
2016-08-12 15:04:37 Ananda's Serum_(2) Hey guys, as i am writing the sequel I am realizing that is is starting to get darker and more rape-y/BDSM like. it contains most of the suggested topics in it, but i want to know if i should veer away from the dark side or if i should keep writing it the way I have been. If i get mixed reviews i will write both a dark and light version. Also i want everyone to enjoy this. i like writing for you people out there, not for me. so i would really appreciate honest feedback. of note: I am fairly fucked up so when i say dark it can get really really dark.Thanks! oh also in the original story Jade and Jacqueline are fifteen and Athena is seventeen, however, this site mandated them to be eighteen. so thats just a background.
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