| 2017-06-03 00:07:18 |
RUNNING into TROUBLE
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While I agree with the others, you have a great setup for a part two of the series, I also agree that you shouldn't rush into one. In either case, it is also a great stand alone story as well. It leaves the reader with their own ideas as to what happens next.. |
| 2017-04-27 20:53:52 |
An Incest Birthday Chapter 29
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Quite an interesting run up to this point. I still think that Chris is really being used by every female ( except Denise ) in the story. I would like to see him develop some sort of backbone. Other than that it is a great story. |
| 2017-04-24 15:31:38 |
Billy, His Mom and Sister Allison
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Seems like you've left the story open for for another addition. Any chance of that happening? |
| 2017-04-24 13:52:17 |
The Fisherman & The Mermaid-Chap 11 & 12
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Another excellent story. I can't believe I've read nearly all of them the past couple of weeks. I can tell fishing is in your blood. I spend my vacation time in NC on the OBX! Some friends also live near Oak Island, NC. Keep up the good work. |
| 2017-03-31 11:02:05 |
The Girls Who Shared a Bed
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Very well done for your first story. Looking forward to part 2. |