| 2017-06-16 12:07:58 |
Cumming of Age _(1)
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Your story in brilliantly written. I'm an author myself (dry technical stuff for pay, some erotic for personal pleasure and expression.). I rate your story as truly excellent on two scores. 1. The story development which creates a true context is flawless (okay a very few misspellings but who's counting.). The pace is just right and don't be dissuaded by the jerks that just want a sex story. 2 and all too poignant, one clown said you don't do that at 14. I know all too well how wrong he was. See, both Sue and i were 14. It was at camp instead of camping. We were both virgins and, like your Anna, she was the the more aggressive; bless her heart. Keep up you writing. There's great talent there. |