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Comments from P-god
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2017-06-05 13:50:11 | Sybil, A Story About Interracial Slavery | It's an interesting story. If I had to say one thing I'd recommend putting "" around dialogue to help separate it from the rest of the text. |
2017-01-18 21:44:30 | Birthday girl_(3) | I wanna read more about these two! A bondage story maybe? |
2017-04-20 12:39:20 | My Dear Sweet Slave: Chapter 8 | Will you write a prequel story about Holly after the final chapter? |
2017-04-10 20:55:25 | My Dear Sweet Slave: Chapter 6 | Great chapter as always. Love the subtle global warming message. I like how it's not all banging. Don't get me wrong the banging is great but it can get boring with too much of it. |
2017-03-23 14:29:40 | My Dear Sweet Slave: Chapter 4 | Sweet chapter. Hope you don't get in trouble for this |