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Comments from Batrachian
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-05-20 04:01:24 | I built my own sextoy | I begin to wonder if you porn writers have ever had genuine sex. The vginal secretions are just that- secretions produced by the cells lining the vagina. Women do not squirt |
| 2010-06-02 07:34:37 | It all started on the school bus. | Such a wonderful change! A literate person writing - perfect English! Thanks, just keep the chapters flowing |
| 2010-10-03 04:07:17 | My first experience_(1) | Before writing I suggest that you learn to punctuate (there are other punctuation marks besides the dash), learn to put a question mark after a question and, most importantly use quotation marks. Then learn the difference between 'cant' and 'can't', 'wont' and won't' etc. Otherwise a little tedious — as many respondants have mentioned. |
| 2010-11-12 09:24:26 | My life with Steph | This is a great story - correct pace, correct spelling (!) and filled with anticipatory material. I can't wait for the next episode - which, I hope will be one of many |
| 2010-11-12 09:24:47 | My life with Steph | This is a great story - correct pace, correct spelling (!) and filled with anticipatory material. I can't wait for the next episode - which, I hope will be one of many |