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Comments from jerry3ddd
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-01-26 10:51:05 | Beautiful Niece Kaylee | This first attempt of writing after 25 years is definatly a success. Your flow in writing and story are very entertaining and I look forward to more of writing. |
| 2017-01-29 11:43:38 | The Dogs That Started It All | I like the way you write and think you should write more. |
| 2017-01-30 15:47:20 | Persuading the Girl Next Door 2 | This story is just going along just great! I'd like to take this opportunity to encourage you to continue your sister_brother_ lover story. Whatever weirdo comments made by weirdos did not make sense nor was it worth anything. Seems a shame to let the rest of that story go to unwritten waste. |
| 2017-05-08 14:19:59 | My life Pt 1 | You are somehow confused, you have jen 2 yrs older, Sarah 9 mos older and Kelly youngest? This is in a family of three kids, you being the last kid born? That's a total of four kids. I see Jen 2 years older, Sarah 9 months older and Kelly pops in the same classes as David. Where's Sarah? Looks like a rewrite. |
| 2017-06-06 20:32:54 | just a tease | Don't worry about your grammar it will improve as you write more, your story and your writing is great! Ignore if you can the smart ass critics who never wrote anything and are all talk. Your writing is interesting and enjoying to read and shows your insight, please keep enjoying to write. |