| 2017-09-19 15:36:29 |
Our First Meeting part 2
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I hear you on that. Make sure to proof read, or have someone do it for you. Also, spacing. Stories are easier to read when your paragraph structure is correct. Finally, be careful on your "Know" vs "No", "There" vs "Their" etc. Grammar and sentence structure go along way. Proof reading will help avoid thing like " When u heard this my cock started to stand" Simple typo... "u" instead of the "I" you intended. Good story premise. Don't let the people who have never submitted a story get you down. Keep writing, keep creating. As for blunt/rude comments from people, ignore it. This is the internet and some people can't help themselves. I have not read the third installment yet. Keep it up :) |