| 2017-05-04 19:25:13 |
Fucking Stepmom in her wedding gown._(1)
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the story has a nice set up and begs for more. one minor issue is that you need someone to read it over before publishing as at some points there are spellingmistakes or some words double typed/ bus as said that is a minor issue that can be easely solved. |
| 2017-04-25 09:22:48 |
California Adventure with Blonde Angel
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A great story. nicely told and fun to read. perfect ending in a way but would love to see a follow up on it. There is much in here that i recognise as i used to have a friend that was bound to a wheelchair. He passed away a few years ago sadly. As said a very recognisable story and please if you have time make a second episode on how this continues. |
| 2017-04-09 12:17:35 |
THE AWAKENING_(4)
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If these are chapters 6 to 8 then where can i find the others? When i click your writername they don't show in the list of the stories you wrote. Only this one is showing |