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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-06-16 14:35:24 | An Unexpected Vacation_(1) | Really good story! Only thing is, start a new line after each person has said something, rather than just putting a full stop and carrying on. It makes it flow better and makes it easier for the reader. Keep it up :) |
| 2017-08-31 15:45:20 | Trucking with Becky Chapter 1 | Really good story! A few tips tho; when characters are speaking, start a new line each time the person talking changes. e.g Becky said I said Becky said Rather than Becky said. I said. Belly said. It will make ur story flow better. :) Looking forward to part two!¡!¡! |
| 2017-08-31 15:45:22 | Trucking with Becky Chapter 1 | Really good story! A few tips tho; when characters are speaking, start a new line each time the person talking changes. e.g Becky said I said Becky said Rather than Becky said. I said. Belly said. It will make ur story flow better. :) Looking forward to part two!¡!¡! |
| 2017-08-31 15:45:59 | Trucking with Becky Chapter 1 | Not sure why that posted twice :/ |
| 2017-09-05 09:45:06 | Two Sisters, One Bed | As this wise man below has stated. Part 2 pllllzzzzz :) |