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Date Story title Comment
2017-06-30 05:12:33 A New Job - Chapter 2 Love the concept of this story! A recent graduate male worker in a all-women environment. Pretty much a college student's wet dream. Wish thought the characters were developed or described a little more to help visualize the story
2017-06-22 08:53:30 Cheer Raider & SABRE Panther Episode 1 Interesting approach to the anime theme with the team up of a cheerleader and average high school guy. Definitely is an interesting premise that can hook a lot of readers. However, I believe the explanation of Matt's role and the back story should have been built with more details. Such as introducing the Cheer Raiders viewpoint in the first fight or when she first became the Cheer Raider. Also, the role of Matt seem very rushed,just getting info in a flash of a light. Maybe a conversation with the robot itself or an ancient presence that gives vague details to the new hero.
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