| 2018-04-20 04:26:17 |
It's Not Rape If I Like It.
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good story but hate the title, pleasure does not mean consent. She said no, therefore anything past that is rape. I understand this is fiction but the "It's not rape if (s)he likes it." is such a dangerous thing to propagate because there are idiots that actually believe it. |
| 2017-07-03 07:02:01 |
The Dragon's Pet: The Series_(1)
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Love the story especially how while the focus is definitely sex, there are other themes and an actual plot. my personal continuation, She continues to help raise generation after generation and eventually becomes a dragon rider in more ways than one the dragons obeying her not out of fear, obedience, or any kind of obligation as is so often the case but out of love and respect. |
| 2017-09-17 05:32:35 |
An incest birthday
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Good story but a few things you need to work on. 1, you need to cut the text talk such as u instead of you. 2, Check your capitalization. 3, Contractions need an apostrophe. 4, Check punctuation and make sure you always close your quotation marks. Other than that great story. |
| 2020-10-13 08:27:47 |
A substitute teacher meets show and tell pets.
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No build up, no development, no context, we don't even get shown what is happening. How did a group of students that are at the oldest 6th grade as that's when you stop being in the same class all day, manage to A) get the drugs in the middle of the school day, B)drug the teacher without her realizing, C) restrain said teacher without anyone noticing, D) get not one but two dogs, presumably large dogs from the de***********ion of the events, into the school, again unnoticed, E) get all the other animals in, not to mention everything in the after. |