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Comments from kel69
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-08-29 17:29:58 | My girlfriend taught me to jack off in 7th grade | Kind of hot. Would have been a whole lot better if you wrote this in either first person or third as opposed to "as a matter of fact this is what we did". For example the beginning with masturbation was decent, the rest was just... a summary for something we didn't read. Good effort though. |
| 2017-10-13 02:23:07 | A New Beginning: Ch. 01 Erudition Revised_(1) | I like the concept mostly. The delivery was dull, passionless, and matter of fact. |
| 2017-10-13 02:34:55 | How Anna discovered she is a little whore. Part 1 | Hot, and sickening. Me dick likes, my everything else hates. Well written, so bravo on that. |
| 2018-02-11 04:24:20 | RAPED ON THE WAY TO WORK | Kind of hot. Mostly dumb. If you had tried to make it more realistic it would have been more interesting. The whole shtick of everyone on the bus, for numerous stops, being in on it... Eh. Potential wasted. |