| 2018-02-21 01:04:06 |
How to Write a Terrible Sex Story
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Hey, Bashful; That's a thought provoking essay, thank you for taking the time to write. I am looking forward to reading your other essays on writing porn. I my self have started several stories that were intended to have lots of sex, alas the logic of the characters has derailed each one. My most recent effort features a succubus as one of the main protagonists and yet I haven't been able to fit sex into the story in a way that feels natural to the flow of the story. I may introduce a bit of mind control as a plot device but the story requires that the main male protagonist exercise a good bit of agency. Mind control and a protagonist's agency do not seem to be very compatible. |
| 2019-01-31 04:54:52 |
Sweet Dreams Part 1 - Prologue
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Many of the comments prior to this expressed my reaction to this story very well. I will repeat the remark approving the slow buildup, very tasteful. |
| 2019-02-10 05:41:18 |
Back to Salome_(0)
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Wow, just wow, I don't think that anything I might add would increase the well-deserved praise that has already been given. Great story! Good job! FWIW This is the first story that I marked as a favorite. |
| 2020-10-27 23:23:59 |
Privilege pt 03
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I thought that this was a well written story. May peace, good health and prosperity be with you and yours. |