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Comments from Shdw'sDelight
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-12-15 16:05:43 | Love is all that matters pt2 - New employee, old habits | Quit using text speech as abbreviations! It's very unprofessional and tacky. Proof read and spell check your work. Otherwise, a good plot with great potential. |
| 2018-12-15 16:05:45 | Love is all that matters pt2 - New employee, old habits | Quit using text speech as abbreviations! It's very unprofessional and tacky. Proof read and spell check your work. Otherwise, a good plot with great potential. |
| 2019-06-11 08:18:36 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4a | Seems like you rushed the forgiveness of Joe and Kimmie. Otherwise another fantastic story as always. Looking forward to the next installment. |
| 2019-06-13 19:28:06 | Sweet revenge and maybe a bit more (S1) | Strong potential for a great series. However, you need to proofread and spellcheck your work. This was a major let down for this story, taking away any enjoyment. |