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Comments from DevilBehindBlueEyes
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-09-24 13:36:07 | A Family Man: Part 1 Awakenings | I realize quite a few mistakes slipped by me during editing this story. I will pay closer attention in the future. Furthermore, this chapter was more about establishing the origins of the protagonist and as a result, may have come across as boring and drawn-on at times. Future chapters will be much more episodic and center around more specific events. |
| 2018-10-02 21:09:16 | A Family Man: Part 2 The Journey Home | @Doozy woof Hunter Thank you for the encouragement, it really means a lot! |
| 2018-11-21 18:34:49 | A Family Man: Part 2 The Journey Home | @Jeffezy626 I'm grateful you liked it and I hope you will enjoy the rest of the story as it develops. |