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Comments from RegularGuy_44
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2018-10-13 06:18:02 | Golf Trip with Friends, Day 2 | Thanks for you comments! I got some good pointers in comments of another story. I have now pretty good idea what I should do next and where to concentrate in my next text. |
| 2018-10-13 07:48:04 | Daughter's leftover | Thank you PABLO DIABLO for your comments! I'm speaking Finnish as my primary language so there are certain linguistic things that tend to be hard for me. I have not written stories in Finnish either so I have lot to learn in story telling also. I did use Word, but I trusted too much in it and see now that it does not help much in fundamental errors that I had. I neglected final editing part and hurried publishing these texts which was an err. In next texts I will put much more effort to that and I believe I can improve it a bit at least. I don't have anyone to proofread so... I will try to utilize thesaurus and dictionary more also, but now I start reading those writers you mentioned. |