| 2019-03-12 21:49:15 |
My Cousin Kara
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Way too many grammatical, structural, and syntactical errors. They kill the flow of the story and make it painful to read. |
| 2019-04-08 22:39:23 |
Lucy's Tale (Part 9)
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Ummm...why not kick John in the nuts, call the cops and level an accusation of rape against him, and I mean in the beginning of the chapter? If Lucy ran outside naked and screaming... with a slap mark on her face... |
| 2019-09-22 22:36:05 |
The Neighbor's Cousin
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Neal, Neil, Kneel, O'Neil... |
| 2019-10-07 15:00:24 |
Babysitting Blues
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A 21 year old high school sophomore who makes $100k + as a secretary and still baby-sits on the side? Yeah, that's believable. |