| 2019-07-10 05:34:42 |
Bait and Switch Retype - Ch 03-04_(0)
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I've been there too brother. My squad got hit, I got a hole in my left leg and picked up what was left of one of my buddies. |
| 2019-11-06 18:13:57 |
Master PC - Kyle's Adventure pt4
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Not sure if you are willing to take suggestions but it would be hot as hell if you introduced lactating and rapid pregnancies into the next chapters. I look forward to whatever you put out next. |
| 2019-11-07 04:49:28 |
Editing Reailty Book 1, Chapter 6: Surprising Consequences
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This series started out great and had great potential but lost it with this chapter. It's like all of the depth and character development was just thrown out the window for bad sex. Hopefully he will be able to edit himself to make better decisions and that will retroactively fix the story and characters |