| 2020-09-22 02:46:05 |
The Sexy Story of Leanna (Part Three)
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Curious what's generating the negative votes on this third part. Too similar, too much dialogue, not enough sex? I can make edits or adjustments. |
| 2020-09-22 15:53:26 |
New Neighbors-pt.1
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Nice flow, I like your easy writing style. Can't wait to see the next chapters. |
| 2020-09-22 15:53:43 |
New Neighbors-pt.1
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Nice flow, I like your easy writing style. Can't wait to see the next chapters. |
| 2020-09-23 03:18:42 |
Instagram Cutie's Mind Controlled Romp 1: Daughter Becomes a Daddy Slut
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Hot!! Def a good read. |
| 2020-09-27 20:12:28 |
The Sexy Story of Leanna (Part One)
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Reply to ThroatHER: Thank you. I tend to stay away from a lot of dialogue and opt instead for de***********ive writing. I can do dialogue but worry about getting the prose and tenses correct in doing so. I also don't like a ton of " " in my writing. Thanks for the comment!! There are 3 more parts of this story. |