| 2008-10-21 15:36:03 |
When I learned How
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nice just the right tone for a young girl, keep more coming |
| 2009-05-12 12:59:12 |
Not What I Expected
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interesting and a little different. nice to read and rates better than the current 50% |
| 2009-06-12 18:24:42 |
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ideas are being developed ok. But the basic use of english is a little shakey. use more paragraphs and proofread. |
| 2009-07-21 18:41:50 |
Finding bliss with my sister
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sexy as all get out and nicely written as well. keep it up |
| 2009-10-06 16:43:54 |
A new world
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goofy as a crazed beaver, but sure was fun. good going |