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Comments from xAznBoix
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-05-15 00:13:56 | Fun Times with Rachel | Hey guys, thanks for all the advice and 'constructive criticism'. :D Sorry if the chocolate chip cookies part threw you off. I tried to add a little, for lack of a better word, humor into it. Won't do it again next time. Again, thanks for the tips and comments. It really helps. Especially for a first time author like me. Except another story coming your way soon. No food references this time. Even if I'm held at gunpoint....well, I'd probably give in then. =P |
| 2009-06-15 00:38:18 | Fun Times with Rachel | Hey guys. I posted my second story and its currently waiting for approval. It's a lot longer than this one but differs in that it isn't incest. I took your advice and proofread it, which I should've done for this story also so sorry about that. I also left out any weird comments about food. In my opinion, I think the other story is much better than this one. So be sure to look for it in a matter of days. xAznBoix |