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Comments from Aviat
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-09-26 04:08:39 | Sexually Frustrated Wife | You alternated between First- and Second-Person. Either is fine, but stick with only one. Otherwise nicely done. |
| 2009-09-26 04:18:02 | The Assification of Johannah | Both thumbs up here! |
| 2011-10-22 05:50:17 | My Sister In Law Beth, Chapters 9 - 13 | Read the whole series in one swell foop.;-) Keep up the good work, and it's great to know you're situation is improved. All the best. |