| 2009-09-04 15:36:38 |
my new submissive family - Part 3 Tom & Mary's initiation
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Quite enjoyable.. Keep it up. |
| 2009-10-28 14:28:31 |
The Slave Trainers--Part Three
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Excellent story. Going to look up the rest of the series. |
| 2009-10-30 13:02:15 |
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Not a bad story. Please put more whitespace between paragraphs to improve readability. |
| 2009-10-30 13:07:07 |
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Hmm. Interesting fantasy that would not have occurred to me. But a good story. Will go back and read part 1 |
| 2009-10-30 13:59:37 |
11th Birthday
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If you don't like the story, don't read it. Clearly fantasy since the author is not a woman. Just a misuse of the "writtenbywomen" tag. |