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Comments from 1cyclops1
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-11-18 21:46:55 | The Beauty of Friendship | The "A's" are quote marks. It probably looks okay to her. |
| 2013-07-06 11:30:11 | Seducing My Virgin Sister | You have great potential but your writing is stilted. Put away the thesaurus for a bit and just flow with it. Work details in tangentially. The two biggest suggestions I have are read more and write more. |
| 2013-09-20 18:17:27 | When lust takes over | I wish I could read French so I could read the original. |
| 2013-12-31 05:09:35 | My Naked Doppelganger (PART 3) | How do you down vote 4 times? |