| 2009-12-02 10:53:57 |
Fascination
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Exelent story, there doesn't seem to be a lot on this age group here, mosly older or way too young, this one is about right. |
| 2010-04-09 20:00:21 |
Teaching Nancy
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Exellent begining, I look forewards to more. Just one thing if you do write a continuation, seperate the sentances with a line not an indentation. Unfortunatly the system does not seem to recognise them, it would just make it easier to read. |
| 2010-04-09 20:06:25 |
Internship at AS&S - Chapter 1
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It seems as though the next chapter will never come, but I live in hope that Everman will return to writing at some point, this is I think the best opening for a sex series I have read, it would be a great shame to let it die. |
| 2010-04-09 20:19:28 |
Sara - First time
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Confusing and poorly explained begining. |
| 2011-11-21 11:46:53 |
Ramadan
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A breath of fresh air (albiet heavy with spices) and very well done. |