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Comments from Olive Oil
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-05-15 18:00:38 | Michelle's encounter | Not a bad story but gramatically, it is terrible. Only one paragraph, very few full stops, no capital letters at the beginning of a sentence and a number of mis-spellings. The story would have been far better if the writer had taken 10 or 15 minutes to check for these errors. |