| 2011-05-28 17:16:29 |
Unexpected sentence let to more
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I appreciate all the constructive criticism. Please bare in mind this was my first story and I cam only get better I'm not normally poor at spelling but I didn't read though it all. But I hope you all enjoy reading i may wright a sequel if you like thanks again Brad x |
| 2011-05-28 17:17:28 |
Unexpected sentence let to more
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Did it again cam was meant to be * can |
| 2011-07-06 17:08:48 |
Eastenders Young Love Part 1
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Great story, good spelling a few mistakes but no one is perfect loved it |