| 2011-04-30 09:59:03 |
The Backyard View
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you have to keep going! |
| 2011-11-10 11:24:25 |
How we entered the incest
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this is horrible.....do what ^^^^^ said, this is so hard to figure out who is saying what...I read for about 5 min before I gave up |
| 2012-05-12 07:52:48 |
My hot little sister_(0)
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couldn't even get like 5 lines into the story, the spelling, grammar, and everything was just horrible....usually that doesn't bother me too much, but I was having to reread several lines, just to make sure I understood what you were trying to say..... |
| 2012-05-15 16:28:32 |
Tricked and Treated at a Halloween Party: Part 2- Realization
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def a 3rd part, and well done, both of these stories are awesome!! cant wait to hear more!! |
| 2015-05-24 21:11:47 |
Daddy's reawakening - Chap 9
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please continue, these are super hot! |