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Comments from Dr_Awesome
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-08-06 23:55:48 | Tommy and Jade | @ biglw17 Yeah, I saw that myself shortly after it was posted. For some reason the whole story didn't copy over, or there was some mistranslation. When I post my next story, I'll fix this massive oversight. |
| 2010-08-07 00:21:09 | Tommy and Jade | @ biglw17 Yeah, I saw that myself shortly after it was posted. For some reason the whole story didn't copy over, or there was some mistranslation. When I post my next story, I'll fix this massive oversight. |
| 2010-09-03 20:51:06 | do me a favor?_(0) | Not too bad. It was engaging and moved pretty fast. I would suggest using spell check and to fix your grammar. Other than that, I'd be interested in seeing where you go from here. |
| 2010-09-25 05:18:15 | The Bartender | Very well done. Superb technique. Only found one or two spelling/grammar errors, which is really impressive for a writer on this site. I would have to agree with one of the anonymous readers below, a bit more dirty talk would do well for another story of this kind or perhaps a part two. |