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Comments from AncientStoryTeller
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-08-30 13:06:47 | The basketball's coming! Part 1 | Thanks guys :D I will attach part 2 and 3 but I'm currently moving so it may take a while... I'll try my best to get it done before a week goes by! |
| 2011-03-05 12:40:02 | FLIGHT 247 LOST BOYS CHAPTER 3 | I actually really like this series of stories and I think it could do really well. Do I have your permission to copy these stories, correct the mistakes, buff up the format as to make it more enjoyable to read? I would obviously link the stories to the original versions! Message me! Nice job! |
| 2011-03-06 02:46:00 | FLIGHT 247 LOST BOYS CHAPTER 3 | I'm just saying the dialogue is hard to read, the details aren't exactly precise, and there are many run-on sentences. I mean in my opinion a corrected version would be much more successful. |
| 2011-04-08 16:52:51 | BOARDING SCHOOL FOR LOVING BOYS chapter 1 | I like the story line, just not the structure. Overall a pretty good story. |
| 2011-04-13 13:37:19 | BOARDING SCHOOL FOR LOVING BOYS chapter 1 | Hey 'boys in the hood'! I see you're having trouble with your stories again... Tell you what: These stories really do have potential and I know people would love them if they were just written a bit better. So do I have your authorization to remake this series and see how the readers react? I will take no credit for it and I will post a link to the original story in the description! Answer ASAP! |