| 2010-11-03 09:15:38 |
Bad dog
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Makes me wanna get a BIG dog again! |
| 2010-11-05 08:33:35 |
Amish Devil\'s Ohio
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You REALLY need education about use of grammar, spelling, etc. It's like you can't speak english or something? Spoils a reader's enjoyment of what is probably a good story. My 4 yr old has better command of English! |
| 2010-11-05 08:34:13 |
Amish Devil\'s Ohio
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You REALLY need education about use of grammar, spelling, etc. It's like you can't speak english or something? Spoils a reader's enjoyment of what is probably a good story. My 4 yr old has better command of English! |
| 2010-11-13 04:32:03 |
Leeza The Teaser
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Thanks for the comments so far - see Leeza the Teaser 2 ! |
| 2010-12-19 04:26:43 |
a night in the woods
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I agree - grammar and spelling are dreadful! Also use paragraphs. Good potential but out there a bit! Try again - practise makes . . . better! |