| 2010-09-21 00:31:09 |
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Not bad, a bit linear, good cherry popping description though! |
| 2010-09-21 00:31:09 |
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Not bad, a bit linear, good cherry popping description though! |
| 2010-09-21 13:01:43 |
Bath Time For Babies
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PEOPLE! There is a difference between writing a story and actually doing something. If this author actually did any of those things, I'd be the first to call the fucking cops. But this is about freedom of speech and freedom of thought! That I will tenaciously defend. |
| 2010-09-23 08:56:19 |
Daddy's Little Minx: Maria
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not bad though I prefer more of a context |
| 2010-09-23 22:00:20 |
The POP-Jammer
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Well, I agree with everything the other commenters wrote. You really have to weed through quite a few stories to find one worth reading. I love to write and am trying to post (though it's taking forever to validate) though I don't really consider myself a strong writer, I just enjoy it. You obviously have a talent and care about your craft. Thanks for the effort, it didn't fall on deaf ears. |