| 2010-09-26 10:00:59 |
A teenage boys fantasy comes true
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Don't be too critical with the details, boys and girls. This is a light, sexy story. I for one enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. |
| 2010-09-27 08:46:59 |
Walking Girl
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Great story. The story lost nothing by keeping the characters anonymous. In fact it enhanced it. I like your work. Let's see more of it. Thanks again. |
| 2010-09-28 07:33:26 |
DRESSED UP WITH NOWHERE TO GO_(1)
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Delightfully provocative. A sin? Yes! But so cunningly crafted and executed. More of the same. Please!!! |
| 2010-12-13 06:00:59 |
Daddy and I
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The story is great but it would be much better and easier to read if you proof read it or got someone to check speling and grammer for you before submitting. |