| 2010-11-20 01:55:34 |
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This was an interesting idea, but TERRIBLY written. If this was cleaned up, lengthened quite a bit, it would be interesting. As it, not too good. But the idea is very interesting! |
| 2010-11-20 01:56:22 |
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Not well written, but a good. Idea. |
| 2010-11-20 02:00:10 |
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Story was again, very interesting, such a fun thought, but it wasn't explained, wasn't well written... the POV and sentence structure looked like a drunk Latvian wrote it.. nothing against Latvians of course. |
| 2010-11-20 02:00:37 |
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Story was again, very interesting, such a fun thought, but it wasn't explained, wasn't well written... the POV and sentence structure looked like a drunk Latvian wrote it.. nothing against Latvians of course. |
| 2010-11-20 02:01:14 |
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Story was again, very interesting, such a fun thought, but it wasn't explained, wasn't well written... the POV and sentence structure looked like a drunk Latvian wrote it.. nothing against Latvians of course. |