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Comments from Invective
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-12-15 19:21:11 | Detention_(1) | I really love this story, although you could've done a bit of a better job with this story. But I have to say it was extremely intense |
| 2011-03-13 14:12:34 | Best of Friends-Revised_(1) | It's in the fiction category... and I do know a freak of nature who has a 7.5 inch cock, thank you. Adam's size is much more realistic, don't worry. |
| 2011-05-03 17:14:41 | My best friend Kyle | You kept switching between past and present tense, and you were grammatically incorrect in a lot of these sentences. Also, please learn to spell, it really does take away from the story when you can't really read it |
| 2011-05-12 22:23:38 | Detention 10 | why are you ripping off bookers stories? these obviously arent his 1. the style of writing is different, so are the sex scenes. 2. brandon became a totally different character leave the stories to michael! |