| 2011-03-17 16:24:38 |
Lord Potter
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hey, just want to know if you think I should continue and if there are any areas you think I could improve, like say my descriptive efforts. |
| 2011-03-17 16:24:45 |
Lord Potter
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hey, just want to know if you think I should continue and if there are any areas you think I could improve, like say my descriptive efforts. |
| 2011-03-19 19:00:58 |
Lord Potter
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I understand and agree with the point about describing the sex better, but I kind of felt that since it was his first time, he wouldn't last long and that there shouldn't be much to describe, since he himself probably wouldn't be able to describe his first time. |