| 2011-06-09 15:08:17 |
Sweet as summer rain.
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Thanks for the comments and criticism. I'll try to fix the pacing on the next chapter and add paragraph breaks for ease of use. Just picked up Open Office to check me on my grammar and spelling. lol @ 9 inches, I suppose it was a flight of fancy. I tend to over compensate for *ahem* personal deficiencies. Any requests as to where you want the story to go? I was initially planning on bringing in Jenna's friend from Texas or possibly introducing one of the migrant worker girls. Basically, are you digging the monogamy, or should I get some company in there? Thanks again for the critiquing. :) |