| 2011-06-10 19:39:28 |
Obsessed with the Cock
|
Oh for God's sake boys, enough of the pissing match. He said he had a body like a Marine. So what? The guy looking like a marine has nothing to do with his sexual orientation. Lord! How did we get on a debate about gay Marines? It was a good story - too short though. |
| 2011-06-10 20:01:32 |
Oh Andrew
|
I agree - and again, too short. Good though - some great visuals, and a few goose-bump causing moments. This sounds like the beginning of more to cum. Can we expect a sequel? |
| 2011-06-11 02:03:04 |
Hot for Uncle
|
Can't wait to read part 2! |
| 2011-06-13 14:57:56 |
Baseball Tryouts
|
Yeah, I liked it okay. WAY too short, and more detail needed. I agree that it is like Michael Booker's AWESOME series (called "Detention" if I remember correctly) - if you haven't read it, do so and take note - he's a very skilled writer. What you have is hot though, and has potential. Looking forward to Chapter 2. |
| 2011-06-13 17:22:02 |
Cassie_(1)
|
OMG, this made me so horny! I absolutely loved it! |