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Comments from ual102161
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2017-11-25 23:14:08 | A old evil awakens . part 2 | You need to find an editor to proof read your stories before being submitted. Your story line is great, don't change the plot, but don't go overboard with too many slaves. Have some romance in the story also. Just remember that if he has kids, he is going to have to provide for them. Too many authors who write stories about his females having babies don't tell how he is taking care of them. |