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Comments from JustinJPS
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-11-26 15:36:02 | Revenge of the son_(0) | Friend, it seems that you have a bunch of English teachers critiquing your work. Not everyone is a "trained and practiced" writer . But from what I read, I liked it. Hope you do more. |
| 2015-11-26 15:49:24 | Candid Camera | Gerr.. I really wish that you had the mother cuss them out and really hurt them than having her take that shit. Was hot but damn, I'd freaking kill him slowly infront of her THEN, MAYBE do what she did in the end. Can you edit this to be more satisfying man? This current ending Kills the whole vibe |