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Comments from gordonjackx
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-12-31 12:37:04 | The Sisters Chapter 1 | Nice beginning. Just try to get the English right so that your readers are not distracted by it. Also a bit of a story line would be nice so we can follow the tale and see where it leads us. Good luck Gordonjackx |
| 2013-01-04 06:35:21 | Breaking In Girlfriend's Sister Part 2 [Short] | Enjoyed the story but somehow couldn't picture it as a girl's writing. Guess my own story might have the same problem |
| 2013-01-04 06:54:39 | GRETA_(0) | Well done - a great story and I think your English is just fine. Please read my story "Eight" and give me your thoughts. Thanks |
| 2013-01-05 23:35:33 | Motel love - not the sleazy kind! (based on a true story) | Thanks Alyssa - grea't story - wish everything that is good for you guys |