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Comments from HolyerthAnthow
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-07-10 21:11:27 | All for Mr. Redman Chapter 11 | I am fairly new to this site, and have to say, this series is amazing and phenomenal. Jade, you write a fantastic tale of lust and love, romance and sex...leaving us wanting more and feeling we are there with you as these events are unfolding. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to the next chapter :) |
| 2011-07-10 21:51:13 | All for Mr. Redman Chapter 11 | I am fairly new to this site, and have to say, this series is amazing and phenomenal. Jade, you write a fantastic tale of lust and love, romance and sex...leaving us wanting more and feeling we are there with you as these events are unfolding. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to the next chapter :) |
| 2011-07-10 21:51:55 | All for Mr. Redman Chapter 11 | I am fairly new to this site, and have to say, this series is amazing and phenomenal. Jade, you write a fantastic tale of lust and love, romance and sex...leaving us wanting more and feeling we are there with you as these events are unfolding. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to the next chapter :) |
| 2012-07-19 10:27:08 | A Game of Inches - Part Eleven | For someone who admittedly hates sports....your realistic portrayal of the attitudes of the football players merely reinforces my disdain....I have to say I do love this story :) I guess the reason I like it so much IS its sense of realism. Through triumph and tragedy, you slowly build these characters up so they feel like our best friends growing up; you keep them real, you dont rush the scenes. The sex is natural and believable, not gratuitous....rare for a porn story site. I would have to agree with many of your other followers, this is a story that begs to be expanded on and published. Sure you make some mistakes in grammar and punctuation....but we arent here to read Chaucer, are we? ;) You even make a rare mistake in your presentation, such as the comment of having 12 men on the field during a key play. But with them not happening often, it is easy to overlook them as a matter of you are only human yourself....and that sense of humanity and humility makes this story grea |
| 2012-07-22 12:23:31 | Camping Trip_(1) | For the anonymous commentor questioning the concept of a campsite with a swimming pool? Yes such things do exist in the northern Midwest in Illinois, Wisconsin, Minnesota, Iowa, North and South Dakota, Nebraska and eastern Wyoming. A company called KOA (Kampgrounds of America) hosts most of the camping areas with them. So before you insult an author for being unrealistic, consider doing a little research yourself first. |