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Comments from katydoes
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-08-13 00:06:24 | Her first time, Part 3 (Conclusion) | I absolutely love this "series". They were well done and I wish they kept going. I want to hear about there possibly weekend and so on. How cheri handles everything, what kind of "talent" she has and what responsibilities she gets around the house. You did an amazing job. Well done! |
| 2011-08-13 02:45:34 | Coaching Clinic - Part 1 | Good story. Try and develop the characters more. You could try having all the girls over for a sleepover to try and see what they all talk about. If you tried you could probably make it a long series. It would be good, interesting, and long. I love to read some of the stories that are a long series of stories. Keep up the good work! |