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Comments from DLGBLG
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-07-22 01:01:32 | Sir, please may I cum? | Please feel free to leave me any feedback. This is my first story that I have written, I hope you enjoy it as much as I did,.. :-) |
| 2011-07-26 06:59:42 | The potential client | My apologies on the punctuation. Somehow my quotes all turned to question marks. I will definitely work on part 2. :-) Would love to hear any feedback, this is only the second thing I have written. |
| 2011-07-26 19:19:42 | The potential client | Thank you very much for the feedback. I appreciate it, I was concerned with the way it showed on my screen, so I'm glad it's just on my version. In response to the question of what I am like...I think we all have that person in us that we want to be. As far as the description of her, yes I used myself to describe her and fantasies always make a good story don't they? Part 2 on the way tonight. |
| 2011-07-27 07:12:55 | Meeting Michelle | Almost made me wish my car would break down. Your skills are wonderful! |
| 2011-07-27 07:17:03 | Becoming one with Clarissa | I would love to see more work from you. The details you include really make you feel like you're watching a movie. Excellent! I also like the leading up to it. It isn't just sex, it's everything involved. |