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Comments from Insatiable Wanderer
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2011-09-18 07:28:46 | Raped by my boyfriend | It's good to see writers of every aspect post. I do hope you continue to write more and improve upon your writing weather fictional or from real life experiences. Some things to note ~Use paragraphs (walls of text are very daunting to the average reader) ~Details (what were you thinking, feeling the little things especially in a true story) Will you write a part 2? (I would very much encourage you to do so) if so i would take the time to write it out, review/edit it multiple times. Doing so can leave you and the reader much more satisfied with the final piece. Please do write a part2 (a more detailed and structured part 1 would be lovely as well) Cheers and don't become discouraged! |