| 2011-11-09 10:19:55 |
The Anonymous Reader
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I liked the juxtaposistion between the main characters initial revulsion, attempting to take revenge but then being caught out in the most unexpected manner..I thought your structuring was good, the story moved on and you explored some very non standard scenarios and chose to write about a hermaphrodite..very clever and a nice twist..I am surprised to read this story from a confirmed heterosexual to be honest, its not a criticism it just took me unexpectedly which all good story telling should..Nicely done..I enjoyed..Keep writing. |