sexstories.com
Comments from JasonMarak
Date | Story title | Comment |
---|---|---|
2013-12-17 23:49:20 | My Irish Virgin Part 2 | Not a bad story. I just take issue with how perfect you made your characters. You got a positive rating, but try to let your characters breath a bit more. There should be parts of your characters that people hate. And hating them because they are unbelievably 'good' doesn't count. lol |