| 2012-01-23 03:51:57 |
Slave Part 3
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Agreed to comment below. Surely any third-rate pencil pusher can make up an erotic story. I believe it takes much more to create characters that connect to the reader. 'Love' is a fragile thing that is very difficult to convey with words. Too little and the entire thing turns into a mess of sex tied together with loopholes and almost no meaning. Too much and it becomes a bit sticky to read and turns uncomfortable with any sudden change of feelings. This marks my tenth or so story read on this site, and I must say that the love between 'Master' and 'Slave' in this exact story is the most spot on and brilliant one that I've read. |