| 2012-06-13 21:02:10 |
Daddy's Little Girl_(1)
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I hope you all enjoy!! Please feel free to leave comments and suggestions on what you would like to see happen. |
| 2012-06-13 21:54:55 |
Daddy's Little Girl_(1)
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Could you try and give constructive critism and offer suggestions on how I could improve instead of completely writing it off as rubbish. That was rude!! |
| 2012-06-13 22:08:26 |
Daddy's Little Girl_(1)
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Thank you! I appreciate the more detailed critiquing. This is the first time I've ever written a story and I did my best. I learn from feedback. I will try to slow it down and allow for more spacing so the story flows better. |